I used to write a lot of fanfiction and short stories several years ago. I've decided to get back into it, this time with a low fantasy setting of my own creation. I'll be using this thread as an area where I can hone my writing skills and receive much-needed feedback from those willing to give it. This story will be a test of my ability to write believable dialogue, reasonable (and believable characters) and a coherent story that will hopefully prove to be engaging and interesting to a wide assortment of readers. 

Critique, whether good or bad, is appreciated. 

Subscribe to the thread if you're interested in seeing what I'll be producing. :)