[quote=@Flagg]
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Looks good! A few thoughts: 

1) would love to see more detail on the giants and what their deal is.
2) Maybe resources in the Deep Wood are not really plentiful (besides wood, obviously). Hunting/gathering probly can't sustain a large Clan, and mining is probably tough in what is essentially a wilderness. Since the whole Clan is built around raiding the South, why not have that be one of the main reasons they do so? For resources. 
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1. Copy, can do. Will let you know when it's done.
2. Well wood has lots of things to hunt, and ocean provides food. So maybe short on war materials and certainly on luxury items, which would explain the raiding?