[@Connor] I mean absolutely no discrespect, but could you write more punctuation into your texts? I know I struggle with it all the time as English isnt my first language, but I just try to put a comma or a semicolon here and there to separate things up a bit. 

I was reading this bit maybe five times, before I realized there are like three different sentences jammed together.

[quote=@Connor]
The Bandit yelled commands into the radio jack acting on instinct drew the only weapon he had and slammed it into the bandits clavicle but as the man collapsed he fired a shot off from a pistol and hit jack right in the left eye jack was left conscious and tried to patch his wounds quickly the man would be no threat as he knew that he was already blacking out from blood loss. 
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And also in regards to your character - it is probably not my place to criticize, but having a person that is good both with melee weapons and guns AND at the same time knows "how to heal almost any injury" seems kinda OP.