[sup][@vikluvslemons] [@Avanhelsing] [@Exit] [@Syn] [@Queentze] [@Klaykid] [@Fabricant451] [@SgtEasy] [@Kitty] [@Bee] [@Emma] [@melissahart] [@Dirty Pretty Lies] [@Filthy Mudblood] [@Altered Tundra][/sup] [color=gray]Please see the comments associated with your character(s) names and make the appropriate edits, but otherwise, you have all been: [center][img]https://i.imgur.com/JNfpS2k.png[/img][/center] [indent][b]Naomi Riley Valencia:[/b] There is a mistake in the history section - it says "Unholy Trinity", instead of HOT. The Unholy Trinity was the original name for the group years and years ago, please edit it to say HOT. [b]Nathan Wagner:[/b] Quote from history section: "After they returned, Nate calisthenics the attention of his grandfather." We believe calisthenics might be the wrong word here? We weren't sure what this meant. Additionally, The Elite should always be singular, it is never "The Elites". [b]Johndel "Jay" Sterling:[/b] Could you please add that he is a junior up in the top section of the sheet. We sometimes use those things as quick references for making lists. Also, as said above, it is always "The Elite" never "The Elites". And a fun side note, he actually looks like he could be related to the Sterling characters that Jordan and I are playing - I'm sure a lot of students will just assume that they are. :lol [b]Grayson "Dick" Wells:[/b] Looks good, my dude. [b]Kayleb Carson:[/b] How did a 17 year old get 5 tattoos? Did he get them illegally - or by a friend or a family member? Also - with the two straws thing - how does he drink juice boxes? :P [b]Isaac Michael Woods:[/b] What a lad this guy is. Love him! [b]Hana Park:[/b] You good, fab. You good. [b]Park Sang Woo:[/b] Please read the rules! You didn't answer the 3 questions, but you did list your favorite food. Be sure to read the information on the BHHS help page and OOC before posting. [b]Jospehine Claire Erickson:[/b] Accepted ~ Make Audrey proud! [b]The Townsend Twins:[/b] Both look good! [b]Pippa Donovan:[/b] Nice house. The blank in history seems like you are looking for a bff for her. I believe Lovely is talking with you about getting that arranged! Let us know if you need anything else. [b]Parker Ashford:[/b] "Welcome to Henry’s harem, friend. Enjoy ur grape juice." - Jordan [b]Savannah Jane Matthews:[/b] DECLINED B/C U DONT LIKE CHERRY CANDIES U ANIMAL. Just kidding, accepted. :3 [b]Shauna Flynn:[/b] Is she gonna come to her mother’s AWE hall of fame induction ceremony? She can bring a date; they’ll serve minors alcohol. [b]Martha Colette Radley:[/b] Welcome, sister! [b]Soleil Amaranthe Jameson:[/b] Ayyyy lmao ur a lad now, girl. Wait a second… that ain’t right... [b]Dante Sterling Mossos-Duclrec:[/b] You're good kid. Maybe not a good kid, but, good, kid. [b]Ariana Song:[/b] "Welcome to Henry’s harem, friendo. Enjoy the Mario merch he showers you with." - Jordan [b]Delilah Mockridge:[/b] The GM team made sad faces on her behalf for the eating disorder, but accepted. [b]Min-seo:[/b] "Welcome to Henry’s harem, friend. Enjoy your free food and shield from Hailey’s awfulness. And probably headpats, sorry. Better hope he dont find that midriff, dude. And probably duck merch for christmas." - Jordan [b]Andrea Jacqueline Banks:[/b] Good to go, sour candy. [/indent] After you have made the suggested changes above, please post your character(s) directly in the character tab (no need to double confirm acceptance!). Please post all of your characters in the SAME character tab post - the single post can be edited to add more characters if you come up with them. See the GM team's character posts as examples. If we have missed any character sheet submissions in the above list, please let us know. At this time, I believe we have reviewed and applied to all! ~GM Silent[/color]