I did some rewritting on the backstory, to add more depth (bc I couldn't be the only person with a three sentence backstory XD) So here is the editted CS

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[center][h3][color=9e0039]Raven in Peacock's Feathers[/color][/h3]
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[sub][color=9e0039]Naomi Riley Valencia[/color][/sub][/center]
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[center][h3][color=9e0039]"The harder the storm, the more beautiful the rainbow."[/color][/h3][/center]
[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] N I C K N A M E (S) [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[list][*] Riley
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[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] A G E [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent]17, October 29
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[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] G E N D E R [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent]Female
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[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] S E X U A L I T Y [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent]Bisexual 
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[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] R E L A T I O N S H I P S T A T U S [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent]Single and looking to mingle
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[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] O C C U P A T I O N [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent]Etsy crafter, but that is more of a hobby for side change 
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[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] C L A S S I F I C A T I O N [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent]Junior 
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[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] R O L E [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent]Jock, but has been seen to hang with the Artists 
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[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] I N D E P T H A P P E A R A N C E [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent]5’6; [url=http://www.black-women-beauty-central.com/image-files/mizani-curl-key.jpg]Curly hair;[/url] the body of the women you see in workout videos and ads.
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[center][h3]W H O A M I ?[/h3][/center]

[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] H A B I T S | Q U I R K S | O D D I T I E S [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent][list][*] Doodles on her hands and arms, and carries a black sharpie with her at all times to do it
[*] Snorts when she laughs
[*] Photographic memory, but can’t remember instructions given orally unless they are repeated
[*] Allergic to cats
[*] Is neither a morning person or a night owl, liking the noon the most
[*] Can’t read cursive
[*] Believes in the Mandala Effect
[*] Quiet when angry, like [i]scary[/i] quiet
[*] Basically a fitness guru
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[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] D R E A M S [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent]Dreams on becoming an Instagram health guru. New Age remedies and all. But, she sometimes fantasies about working in a couple of the Green Company’s branches, but she knows that’s an insane goal that will never happen.
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[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] L I K E S [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent][list][*] Dogs
[*] Climbing
[*] The sunset
[*] Dancing
[*] Running
[*] Going to the movies
[*] Brunch

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[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] D I S L I K E S [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent][list][*] Planes
[*] Camping for more than two days
[*] People who don’t listen
[*] Swimming
[*] Just exams and tests in general
[*] The word “chartreuse” 
[*] And the color chartreuse

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[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] F E A R S [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent]Aerophobia, Claustrophobia, Paraskevidekatriaphobia, Spheksophobia  
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[center][h3]D E F I N I N G M Y P A S T[/h3][/center]


[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] H I S T O R Y [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent] 	Naomi had one goal in life: to keep herself stable throughout the discourse before her. That goal came shattering down in the third semester of kindergarten when one of her “friends” (who was really just a bitch with a better crayon set) scribbled out a page in a book she was reading and blamed Naomi for it. The teacher didn’t believe the scribbletier, who was sentenced to ten minutes in time out, and who had left Naomi feeling betrayed.
	Naomi lived in Northern California for primary schooling days. She was born to a stay at home mother who seemed loving enough, but Naomi is pretty sure her mom married her dad for the yearly salary; which he earned from his modest, but very well stationed, position in the corporate ladder of the Green Company. While they aren’t close to the richer kids and families that they now live around, Naomi knows that her life is a dream to others. Her father, who came from a low life himself, always put an effort to make Naomi understand the gifts of money they had. Then again, “understanding” meant watching documentaries about charities and not actually doing anything themselves. 
	At the age of four, her parents decided that they needed to begin to get Naomi into things that would make collages more likely to pick her up. Having a talented actor or writer as a kid would be a good section on a resume; but they found themselves to be surprised when Naomi wanted to pursue cross country. Joining a local team, she found herself to be a decent runner, and, with practice, found to be a formidable opponent at the 8th and freshman running levels when she entered 7th. 
	Then one Thursday over the summer to Highschool, the letter came in from Beverly Hills Highschool that said they accepted her into their school. Of course, Naomi knew that her parents pulled a few strings to get some less decent grades overlooked, and that her athletic abilities were a factor, she was still proud to think that she would be going to one of the best schools. At least, in terms of the teaching and equipment. When she arrived on her first day, she realized high school would be just like in the movies.
	Because she was always around the jocks, she never found herself to be prey to the HOTs who would rather prey over those that they could catch. Naomi found herself in the background, wanting to blend in in the halls but let herself fly free outside of those walls. Now she is entering Junior year, almost done with school and nearly done with everyone’s bullshit. She’s coming in more confrontational, and will not back down from a fight.
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[center][h3]A C A D E M I C S[/h3][/center]

[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] E X T R A C U R R I C U L A R A C T I V I T I E S [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent][list][*]Cross-country 
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[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] B E S T & W O R S T S U B J E C T S [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent][b]| B E S T |[/b]
History, PE
[b]| W O R S T |[/b]
Spanish, Math
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[indent][color=9e0039][b]| |[u] E X T R A N O T E S [/u]| |[/b][/color]
[indent] Rules: Their original name was The Unholy Trinity and HOT is an acronym for their names, the CANDIES true purpose is Love and Ophelia leads the new generation, and Bryant O’Connor led the original ELITE with four other members
[url=https://soundcloud.com/iamdialock/sets/lilaconic]Theme Song[/url]
Face Claim: Maisie Richardson-Sellers
Dialogue Color: 9e0039
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And also [@Emma], I think that is a great idea!!