[@LordofthePies] Blue asked me to screen your CS. Here are some issues I've found: [list][*]It appears that you copied large amounts of text and CS info from [@Blu]'s sheet. This needs to be changed. [list][*]You copied his birthday. 
[*]You copied his quote.
[*]You copied his theme song.
[*]In some parts of the CS, you're even using his color code[/list]
[*]You are missing the Extras needed under anything else - please re-read the rules for what you need to include there
[*]You have incorrect color coding for the personality traits, as well as two many. It should be 6 traits - three negative, three positive. The negative in red, the positive in green.
[*]Please break up his personality section into two paragraphs - and throughout, he should technically be referred to as 12. He doesn't know his real name is Ronan and per what [@BlueSky44] said in the OOC, you can switch to using their real name [i]after[/i] they've learned what it is. 
[*]Fears need to be listed in bulleted format and you need 3.[/list]

Once you've fixed these, please resubmit and your CS will be evaluated again.