[@Rockin Strings] alright in order of my disapproval as I see them. You have a thread bare personality for both characters. What feels like a cliche brother/sister partnership, coupled with a stock photo. While i don't really frown on that, I do feel it's a tad lazy and out of theme. Most of us are using animated characters as a reference image. You also fail to have anything written about their appearance that makes them unique. Scars, bags, preffered clothing, hairstyle, eye color, height. Nothing that shapes them as anything beyond a stock photo. Another problem is that you have one background/history for both characters. Ifyou want two characters I expect two seperate and semi-unique history for each one. I don't care if they're related and fused at the hip. Show me you can do perspective for both individually. On that issue I would also like to see a seperate image for each character you intend to play. Finally, you absolutely will not be a darkness element. We have one currently and they got the spot due to a spectacular character sheet. If you cannot meet their level of detail I can't trust you to play an element with significant potential impact to later plot. Lastly, your bag of miscellaneous stuff? I want a detailed list of everything in it or it won't be allowed.