[@Nogg Saron] Welcome aboard, and looking at this CS, glad to have you. Looking it over I like it thematically, the backstory is solid and the powers look good to me. I only have have two things to say about it in regards to critique; 1) I don't see where the doctor is getting a Tactician skill. From his backstory I would surmise his element lays more with subterfuge, deception, and manipulation. Schemes perhaps. Though Tactics seems off to me especially when his skills seem more suited to being off the field. If you really desire a more Tactician style of character though, it would make more sense to say he spent a significant amount of time as an army surgeon so he could at least be in contact to organized military action to gleam some skill in that area. After that the Nexus would bolster the rest. 2) For the sample post, could you put spaces between the paragraphs? A few dabs of the Enter-Key makes things far more visually pleasing to read. Other then that I like what I see. Just make sure he stays 21ft away from Lucille or she might get pissed when her plants start dying around her :3