[quote=@Lady Amalthea] I mean real villains, not asshats that are just brooding and want to be loved. [/quote] You mean any and all anti-heroes? ;D [quote=@jbeil] Pretentious writing, both IC and OOC. We get it, you read a thesaurus. Learn to put the words together properly, don't just toss 'proclaimed' in where 'said' will do. Don't call yourself an 'advanced writer' who does three paragraphs a time, give me an example of what you do. [/quote] >When you first read that, and think-'Huh, proclaimed is actually a pretty simple word, learned stuff like that in grade school...' Oh no! I'm one of them aren't I? D: *Darth Vader Nooo's* [url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gNo1jif8bfk]Should've used aforementioned. ([i]Relevant link.[/i] :P)[/url] Well, half the month is already over and I'm still not done with the process of moving. And I've had no extra time to focus and write for roleplaying, nor has my internet been consistent, so I might even have more delays when attempting to write for my fiction/rping. [i]Yay.[/i] ...At least I'm actually doing some roleplaying?