[quote=@Caits]
[@Almalthia]
I have a couple of issues with  Jocelyn . Being 85 years old, she wouldn't be a student. The academy is aimed at the youth- those still learning their powers and such.  Jocelyn has had her abilities for a good long time- she'd know how to use them, right? 

And where was she during the wars? What was she doing? 

To be honest, she's more fit to be medical staff at the school more than a student.

And I should have requested this earlier, but perhaps a little more information for both of the CS's on personality would be good. 
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Can we put her in the position on the Medical Staff? I'd love that. I can tweak her backstory if you want to me to make her younger. That was pretty much how I originally envisioned her but I am willing to work with it to fit her in. I have played her in a Mutants and Masterminds campaign and that was a cross worlds; DC and Marvel where she was a geneticist for Luther Cor that went rogue when she found out what her research was doing. So I have done some tweaking before. I just really love my Tonic <3 <3

I'd be more than happy to outline their personalities better for you. I did the stupid thing of being up way too late and trying to work on an intense awesome mind blowing character...which of course didn't happen...sad day.

[quote=@Vicier]
[@Almalthia]; haii..! One of your friendly Co-GM's here. Would have responded yesterday, but I was busy running around looking after some friends who maybe had a little too much to drink, and who have fallen in love with my pug @.@;;

I had a read over both of your darling girls; I would, personally (this is just me), would like to see more information about your characters, especially a little more elaboration in both the personality and the powers sections. Don't be afraid to go a little more in-depth with it, hun. :'3
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Thank you @Vicier!!! I will defiantly make those changes!!!!