[@Jangel13] Okay I have a couple of concerns and some contradictions to go over. He is very similiar to a Demigod that we currently have, Keyla Harms(Daughter of Mercy). She even has one of her powers named Serenity, which basically does what your power calming presence does. As my character was here first I'm going to have to ask you pick a different aspect of change it to where it doesn't overlap with her powers. Now, moving on. Age- 230 is too young for the timeline. If he was only 230 years old that would but his birth in 1788, a time when the Gates were shut and Lunus(The moon), wasn't even active. Parents- You say his father is Lunus but who is his mother? Then later down in the history you say [i]"He was born from the intense desires of innocents that wanted nothing to do with war or fighting.."[/i] So which would you rather have? History- It has a lot of inconsistencies. The first history block is what he was doing before the Gods were banished to Earth. His second history block is what he did on Earth without his powers. Motive- His motive sounds very sinister to me, which goes against his aspect.