[@shamrocknroll]
Usually, I have the paragraph lengths so I can wade out people who are half interested, don't roleplay seriously or are part of the free.
You're part of another RP of mine and what not, so I don't mind giving you the benefit of the doubt considering I've already seen you rp.
Only issue is Seattle is not New Seattle or Other Seattle, it's still just Seattle (to everyone's knowledge). New Philly is the only city-state within the state known for its neo-name, some places have been renamed or kept their own name. 

Feel free to move it over.