[@ineffable] - Sample post just needs to tie into the theme. 

[@ColouredCyan] - I'll get a PM sent your way with some thoughts on your girl.

[@Thecrash20] - Most of the history in your CS doesn't exist in this universe as Batman didn't have any sidekicks. If you wanna remake Red Hood as another vigilante in Gotham unrelated to Batman that's cool. However you're gonna have to make it good cause I've already got a guy with a pair of pistols and a funky helmet in the League [see my Guardian]. 

[@Shellshock] - I was on the fence about accepting Katana, but if you've changed up your CS to Capt. Marvel I'll have to take another look. I'll try and get to it tonight, it just depends if I fall asleep at the desk again or not...

[@Archmage MC] - I'm holding anyone from the previous RP to a higher standard, and compared to a lot of the other returning players' sample posts your's is lacking. It did manage to stay on topic, and I noticed you added a bit more when I mentioned how important the Sample Post was this time around, but I need a bit more effort. Other players showed some real creativity, and I'm not seeing it here. Looking at the sample again, there were only nine sentences in the entire sample not attached to a line of dialogue. And that was AFTER you added more. Gotta let the character shine and really make it feel like a cartoon person in a more realistic world. 

If I missed anybody my apologies. It's late and I worked another long shift. Just @ tag me if I missed anything or anybody. Still plenty of time to submit a CS for this.   

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