[@RumikoOhara] does WIP mean you need to edit it more, or that you want the ok to post? cause I don't have many problems with it; I would however like a bit of balance/faults? maybe a little more personality--what makes her tick, what's a weakness, etc. it doesn't have to be anything huge; just something to knock her off-kilter sometimes. also, did her birth mother die? is her foster parent a scientist or just a resident? 

answer some of that and I can give you the ok. btw, I love that art, I see it on yt music channels all the time.