[quote=@OliveYou] [@RumikoOhara] does WIP mean you need to edit it more, or that you want the ok to post? cause I don't have many problems with it; I would however like a bit of balance/faults? maybe a little more personality--what makes her tick, what's a weakness, etc. it doesn't have to be anything huge; just something to knock her off-kilter sometimes. also, did her birth mother die? is her foster parent a scientist or just a resident? answer some of that and I can give you the ok. btw, I love that art, I see it on yt music channels all the time. [/quote] I posted her as a WIP just for the reason that I knew she needed something to be acceptable Her Mom could be either deceased or as I was picturing it one of those that couldn't face what she was a part of which left her alone in the world. Her Foster mom is a much needed NPC who I see as the project Psychologist and think she should be similar to Leonard's mom from Big Bang Theory mingled with Sheldon's mom; clinical but nurturing. As for a weakness, I could add that she can't disconnect from the net around her which I hinted at in her personality which could mean that she is the Queen of the Non-Sequitur. Also, it might be funny if when she gets excited her hair does the Tesla coil trick and touching her in that state can impart an involuntary taser effect