[@mercenarius] Hey! Most of that's fine, there's just one thing we'd like changing if that's alright.

'Unable to fluently speak the local language and without a steady source of income, Annest decided that her best course of action was to head back to the UK.'

Long story short, English is required schooling in Germany, and you wouldn't struggle to find people who spoke it in Berlin. Not having a steady source of income is still a good enough reason to head home, so if you just remove the part about not speaking the language from the start of that sentence it'll be fine.

Once that's done, you're accepted!