[@ArisenMoon]
Aye, no offense was meant, I'm just plainly stating that it confused me, whatever point you were trying to make. Try working on your paragraph structure and the like. The first sentence in a paragraph is your topic sentence- use it to essentially give a summary of the rest of the paragraph, for any time you're trying to make any sort of point. 

	For example, this is a topic sentence, the single point I want to make with this paragraph. The rest of the paragraph, including this sentence, is all supposed to be in support of the topic sentence. Making sure you have a clear topic sentence is key.

	I didn't really identify a topic sentence that was clear and concise anywhere, nor did the general context of the post really support one way or the other- I felt like it was a little muddled, because there was no beginning that led the rest of the reasoning you were writing.