[quote=@Flynn]
[@Jeyma]
I love it! A nice mixing pot of cultures.
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Thankyou!

[quote]In the history of Sinverland, you mention Emperiat. That should be Torivian. Emperiat is the old name I gave to the kingdom before. But I disliked it. I probably skipped it somewhere in the intro text.
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There's a "History of Emperiat" hider in your initial post. Also, the "Magic," "Location location location," and "Religion" hiders all refer to it as Emperiat. That left me pretty confused, so I eventually decided that Torivian must be the name for the Empire and Emperiat must be the name for the capital province that founded Torivian.

I edited my N.S. and plopped it in Char.

[quote=@Tangletail]
[@Flynn] I'll have a character sheet going later on tonight.

The society the bard is coming from would likely be from a kingdom that takes logistics, bureaucracy, rhetoric, music, and art very seriously. 

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Sounds a bit like Sinverland, at least in the terms of music and art. I wonder if that'll make an interesting dynamic between our characters- especially since you're making a bard.