[quote=@Poi] [@Avemelle] Here's the old sheet. I'm more than likely going to update it in the next day or so to my new CS layout and the new CS in this thread, but if you could look it over and see what needs to be addressed/changed, that would appreciated. Probably going to rewrite the backstory and what not (but keeping it more or less the same) seeing as I wrote this 10 months ago too. [center][hider=Maemi] [color=#dfbf9f][h1][u][b] Nakana Maemi [/b][/u][/h1][/color][h3][sup][color=#dfbf9f][b]Height:[/b][/color] [i]162 cm[/i] [color=#dfbf9f][b]✿[/b][/color] [color=#dfbf9f][b]Weight:[/b][/color] [i]49 kg[/i] [color=#dfbf9f][b]✿ [/b][/color][color=#dfbf9f][b]Age:[/b][/color] [i]15 years old[/i] [color=#dfbf9f][b]✿ [/b][/color][color=#dfbf9f][b]Hair Color:[/b][/color] [i]Sandy Blonde[/i] [color=#dfbf9f][b]✿[/b][/color] [color=#dfbf9f][b]Eye Color:[/b][/color] [i]Red[/i][/sup][/h3] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/TAf7Bky.png[/img][/center] [center][i][color=#dfbf9f]"Farming is a profession of hope." -[/color] [url=http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/754600.Brian_Brett]Brian Brett[/url][/i][/center] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/i6fLcHF.png[/img][/center] [color=#dfbf9f][b][u]Attributes[/u][/b][/color] [color=#dfbf9f][b] Name:[/b][/color][i] Nakana Maemi[/i] [color=#dfbf9f][b] Age:[/b][/color][i] 15[/i] [color=#dfbf9f][b] Race:[/b][/color][i] Human [/i] [color=#dfbf9f][b] DOB:[/b][/color][i] Feburary 7, 2002[/i] [color=#dfbf9f][b] Zodiac:[/b][/color][i] Aquarius[/i] [color=#dfbf9f][b] Occupation:[/b][/color][i] Student, Part-time Florist[/i] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/i6fLcHF.png[/img][/center] [color=#dfbf9f][b][u]Theme[/u][/b][/color] [youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r1HNjHgtGSI[/youtube] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/i6fLcHF.png[/img][/center] [color=#dfbf9f][b][u]Background[/u][/b][/color] [i]For generations, [url=http://i.imgur.com/LAuBIsq.jpg]Nakana Maemi[/url]'s ancestors spent their days farming rice paddies near their quaint country town as their primary source of income. However, since too much or too little rain would always have the possibility of ruining a year's worth of crop (and income), her family turned to realms of magic, specifically nature related magic. If ever a problem arose with their harvest, they would wave their staves and wands and speak a few words as the magic revitalized the fields. The use of magic had eventually increased the yearly harvest total for Maemi's family, and the extra rice grown would be sold to merchants or given away to the poor.[/i] [i]Eventually, a bright-eyed Maemi came along, and her parents began to teach their magic to her so that one day Maemi might take over the harvest. Beginning with weather-beaten patches of brown grass and withered flowers desperate for water, Maemi's understanding of the basics was relatively smooth, excluding the few hiccups that Maemi's parents sorted out. Later throughout her training on a warm yet fateful summer evening, Maemi took notice of a news report about droughts and the decrease of the world's food supply that flashed across the only television in her family's country house. Outraged that such a thing was happening, Maemi had sworn an oath to her parents that she would do something to combat the heat and bring back the beautiful and flourishing nature. Almost coinciding with Maemi's oath, her invitation to the academy arrived. Knowing that such a prestigious invitation could possibly do wonders for both the farm and Maemi's goal, her parents helped her pack on the condition that she keeps in contact with them on a regular basis.[/i] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/i6fLcHF.png[/img][/center] [color=#dfbf9f][b][u]Magic[/u][/b][/color] [i]Maemi's magic is based around the concept of nature, similar to a druid's magic. While she doesn't have the power, for instance, to summon vicious thorned plants to assault her foes or anything else that requires a grand understanding in the realms of magic, Maemi can resurrect small sections of plant life as long as the plants are minuscule like grass and flowers. She can also change an apple's taste from sweet to sour, and vice versa.[/i] [color=#dfbf9f][b][u]Magical Equipment[/u][/b][/color] [i]Maemi carries around a short wand made of ancient pagoda wood in her hoodie's pockets. A small branch extends from the main shaft, presenting an ever-growing green leaf that is attached to the end of the branch.[/i] [/hider][/center] [/quote] The sheet is totally fine. I'll accept it though, if you do plan on changing a bit of backstory or character elements I'll be glad to re-check it! The only thing you need to change is your birth of date since the years have changed 'n such.