[quote=@13org]The explosives are really harmless. If it gets detonated while you hold one, the max that it will cause its probably small bruises... nothing serious.[/quote] In that case Anya might want to replace the explosive with a thermite charge instead. Explosive would shatter the device, but may leave some components intact, while a thermite charge would melt the device, transforming it into a molten lump of slag metal which would be worthless to anyone wanting to salvage the tech. Plus it'd be a little more discouraging to anyone attempting to tamper with one of them. [quote]About the hum, I was thinking in making it audible... but what are your thoughts on the ThirdEye as it is right now?[/quote] I'd advise against making the hum too audible, since as it is Anya could plant the device on a vehicle or even a person without them noticing too easily. This could then be used to 'map' an area as the target moved through it, especially if she tagged a security guard or sentry working a patrol route. [quote]All in all, its range is what will dictate if its too strong or too weak. What do you think?[/quote] From the way I'm reading the description of her perception augmentation, it sounds similar to Hinata Hyuga's genetic ability [url=https://youtu.be/jc9iHrefpHk]Byakugan[/url] in [i]Naruto[/i], where she has a full awareness of everything around her but with the additional option of focusing her senses in order to extend the range of her ability upto 10km in a certain direction. By using the ThirdEyes Anya does something similar, but unlike Hinata, who could just stand on top of a building scanning everything for 10km around her, Anya would have to find some way to deploy her devices to a location before detecting what was there. This raises a couple of questions for me.[list=1][*]Does a ThirdEye need to be manually activated by pulling the pin, or could it be activated from a remote location after it had been placed somewhere earlier?[*]Can the ThirdEye be fired from her rifle, allowing Anya to deploy them at a considerable distance? If deployed in this manner, would the pin be removed as the device was fired, or could it be activated after reaching its target (or somehow being intercepted)?[/list] If they can be deployed in this way, Anya would take on similar skills to [url=https://youtu.be/nP1eY-FnVuU]Saito, the sniper from [i]Ghost in the Shell: Stand Alone Complex[/i][/url], whose cybernetic targeting eye is able to be linked to satellite systems giving him 'perfect' aiming capabilities. Unless the feed is hacked and the target knows he's aiming at them, allowing them to avoid his shots as he makes them (as seen in the first season's second episode [i]Bōsō no Shōmei TESTATION[/i].)