[@thewizardguy] Firstly I want to thank you for your interest in my game. I'm always happy to have new players join the fold. :) That said, there are a number of issues that need to be addressed on this character before it's ready to be approved. First is the appearance section, which is, well, completely missing. I'm not sure why there is no appearance but it is absolutely mandatory. I was considering not even reading the rest of the CS until you finished it, that's how much emphasis I place on being able to properly describe how your character looks. Second is your history, in particular the affiliation with the Community. It's clear you haven't read through the IC (not that I expect you to, considering its length) but Patriarch's power has been discovered in character (though it hasn't spread to public knowledge just yet). Suffice it to say that if he were part of the Community at [i]any point[/i] that's it for him. He's in for good because he no longer has a choice in the matter. Last but definitely least, since it appears to be grammar and minor classification discrepancy, is his power. He has no breaker state. A "breaker" is a change in his physical state that he "switches" on and off that completely breaks how his body reacts to physics. Absorbing and integrating matter to his cells doesn't exactly fit that description because it's well within scientific understanding to integrate foreign material into cells. If he physically transformed into the material he absorbed then that's a whole other story (how can a person be made of iron and function as a living person? Etc.). However since he has to touch something to absorb it, that does classify him as a striker. And finally you will want to proofread what you have written. There's a line that says "nonliving objects cannot be absorbed," which would mean he only absorbs the living, but that feels to be a typo. Fix these problems and I'll look him over again. I know the history will need a pretty major overhaul because of that one crucial detail.