[@Perpenheimer][@Verticus]

Hi Perp I was confused and wrote this up, I hope it doesn’t come across as a debate of your suggestions but a request on clarifications. 

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Okay now for the breakdown of the list first

[u][color=red]- super enhanced senses- [/color][/u]

[i]Equipped an advanced onboard sensor enhancements her eyes are able to compensate for bright flares of light, telescopic high-resolution enhancement, HUD, and cookiecutter function. (able to miss friends in combat with ranged weapons)[/i] -Quote from CS- 

Her enhanced senses are just her eyes, I made no claims to any other enhanced sense

[u][color=red]- presumably tough cybernetic body-[/color][/u]

Her muscles and body frame are built with a view more towards ruggedness to enable her to withstand the rigors of vehicle combat [color=yellow]but can also translate into a formidable foe in ground combat though not as deadly as those borgs built for close combat[/color]

>but can also translate into a formidable foe in ground combat though not as deadly as those borgs built for close combat.<

Cut that last bit out 

[u][color=red]- wounds are nothing to her- [/color][/u]

 Her body is a machine, she has never known what it feels like to be really touched, she can’t really taste anything, the face she wears is not her own, she can never conceive. She still suffers damage if you shoot her and yes pain sensors would be on limiters in combat because it makes sense to do so.

[u][color=red]- cold and ruthless to her enemies-[/color][/u]

[i]Yvonne is all business to those outside of her faction but to those who are members of the Alvirstein faction she is friendly and helpful.[/i] Quote from CS

I never said she was cold or ruthless to her enemies

[u][color=red]- cheerful and kind to her teammates-[/color][/u]

[i]Yvonne is all business to those outside of her faction but to those who are members of the Alvirstein faction she is friendly and helpful.[/i] Quote from CS

Okay this part bothers me because Why wouldn’t she be friendly and helpful to her fellow workers?

[u][color=red]- extremely smart- [/color][/u]

Pilots are usually some of the smartest people in a room if they are military trained

[u][color=red]- master pilot-[/color][/u]

At age 16 Yvonne’s true purpose was revealed to her when she was subjected to intensive Space/Atmos craft piloting for 2 years external and who knows how long virtually [color=yellow]eventually making her a pilot without peer.[/color]

 I suppose I can go Talented Rookie but I did write her up as having done 2 years of practical and can cut out her personal opinion at the tail end.
 
[u][color=red]- extreme proficiency with a wide selection of weapons- [/color][/u]

[i]Her Favored weapons are handguns but she is rudimetrialy trained in larger weapons and either Gauss or Energy Projection[/i] Quote from CS

Again I am confused, the only mention in my sheet to weapons skill is in her gear section showing her gauss pistol and saying she favors handguns but isn’t expressed as Extreme proficiency even in her favored pistols. In fact I say she is rudimentarily trained in larger weapons at the end

[u][color=red]- mysterious- [/color][/u]

I thought the Alvirstein Faction was Mysterious

As for the Vac Suits I can dump them for a Soyuz Suit with patches as long as it passes a safety inspection

As for the rest I can dump it all as well.[/hider]