Seems fair to me, I was a bit hyperbolic in my original run through of it. I would cut those bits you suggested, but I still think she's still a little powerful. To me, I think her Personality is the weakest bit of the CS and needs more depth. If her only two tenets are that she's friendlybto those she likes and all business to everyone else it makes her a bit two dimensional. I would compensate with some character flaws in her Personality. Just flesh it out a bit more.


I should probably just cut and paste "add a couple of character flaws" at this point.