Interest checks are allowed to be as highly detailed or as simple as they need to be due to how they are designed to gather interest for a [i]potential[/i] roleplay. So while the others may be correct on their critiquing, this isn't the right place to do so; just as if the GM wishes to be critiqued, they have the right to accept or deny such advice.

Taking all that into account and what has happened, [@Scott Silverado], what would you like me to do? I can: 
1) Hide a section of posts (including my own) to bring the attention back to the roleplay. You will just need to point out from where to when, or 
2) we can close and reopen a new thread so the focus on that one is fresh and free from distractions. That will give you the opportunity for if you wish to make any edits but that is up to you.