[@Ryik] Yeah, I was cool with Damian's name being in western order since he is western. And I call Hisakawa as such because native Japanese speakers rarely call each other by their first name (you'd have to either be family or be very close friends or romantic partners), so I typically call Japanese characters by their last name. But yeah, adding the comma might make more sense, I don't wanna make it more confusing for everyone just because I like to flaunt my knowledge of Japanese naming customs.

In any case, I like your charachyer, and thanks for your interest!