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@Aerandir

If he runs out of magic while playing the song, then it ends then and there. If he's fighting, then he'll have to avoid attacks while playing, which will probably be hard, since his magical focus is on the playing and not defending himself.

As for immune to ice, im not sure. That'll just be a weakness for him i guess.
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I've written the history completely forgetting to take into account the Chosen's markings which are present at birth so I am going to have to re write the history. Please ignore current one, I am reworking it and will update shortly.
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@Grnmachine Here are the things we decided should be required for the viola as we saw some ways it could be abused and we want to make sure it isn't too OP:
So a big thing is that your character will need to maintain eye contact on the beast, his full concentration needs to be the creature, if he looks away the spell breaks or if he loses sight of the beast somehow (like by attacks from other chosen) the spell breaks.
Another thing is that if there is a loud noise that interferes with the music being heard the spell is broken.
Finally and probably most importantly, it has no effect on the bigger creatures/beast especially the Hunters and Guardians(you will learn more about those when the bestiary is shared within the ooc post).

I hope that you understand where we are coming from as sometimes this could make things a bit boring when involving creatures that don't travel in packs or such. We all truly love the uniqueness of the viola and are excited to see how it plays out as long as these guidelines are followed.
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@onenote@jynmi88eagerly awaits to read more ca
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@onenote@jynmi88eagerly awaits to read more ca


Well, currently I'm trying to figure out what I want for Ruby's familiar. It's tougher then I thought it would be.
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@onenote Moles

the Olm



basically a newt lives in caves where there is no light
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@Aerandir I might go with the Olm, kind of reminds me of a Axolotl XD
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cools!

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Okay, I just want to preference my cs by saying I added more info on the shadow tendrils and spikes, added her familiar, history and other section. I also want to say I didn't know about Aerandir having his character's father be the previous chosen for his element because I didn't really look over his cs until just a bit ago. I thought I was being original with Ruby's mother until I was just about done and looking over some of the other characters to see how to end Ruby's bio. So if I need to change Ruby's mother to not be the previous shadow chosen, that's fine, I just wanted to see first since I spent a bit of time writing it out (and its not a big deal if I do need to change it since Aerandir went with that angle first and I was just to dumb to actually look before I wrote).


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I added the restrictions you said, and i do understand why you have them in place. Hypnotism isnt easy to "balance" by any means. My only question is would i be able to use it on other chosen?

Side-note, i did my history.
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@onenotei mean it’s up to the gms. They said it was rare for that to happen. But I’m ok either way. Could give them something to bond over. The knowledge that their training is basically killing their parents. I didn’t go into it on my cs but lach came to terms with it when he was younger, his father explaining something to him which helped him accepted it greatly
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Right! History rewritten (think this history works better so thats awesome) so character done.

Phew! ofc let me know if you require any changes etc.


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@Virani CS looks good!
@Grnmachine You can have it affect other Chosen, however it's gonna take more than one post and you have their familiars to take into account so it's a pretty high chance of getting interrupted.
@onenote You are good with your history and the rest of your character!
@Aerandir Your CS looks good as well!
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@CAWs For Alarm I take it then that my CS is also good?
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@Grnmachine Only problem we have with your CS is that you said your character didn't know he was a Chosen till he was 8, however they are born with their markings so they would know since birth.
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@CAWs For Alarm That was actually mentioned in my history. Jonah thought his parents were joking about that, and didnt fully believe him until 8.
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@Grnmachine He wouldn't be able to deny it, nor would he think it is a prank for many reasons. The first is that he has had that mark since he was born and there are only marks on the chosen. Second the disciples of the water goddess would be checking in on him multiple times throughout his life, not keeping it a secret at all. Third, the previous water chosen would also check in on him a lot throughout his life. Fourth, everyone and i mean everyone would know his family and him. They'd know he was the chosen of water so there is no getting around it being mentioned to him multiple times by multiple people. Plus there are occasionally meetings of all chosen ones which include previous and the new ones start going too about at the age of 5.
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Should be my last change. @Kitty
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@onenotei mean it’s up to the gms. They said it was rare for that to happen. But I’m ok either way. Could give them something to bond over. The knowledge that their training is basically killing their parents. I didn’t go into it on my cs but lach came to terms with it when he was younger, his father explaining something to him which helped him accepted it greatly


Ahhhhhhh nothing like knowing you both are slowly killing one of your parents to bring people closer XD But yeah that could be interesting!

@CAWs For Alarm@Kitty So I have questions about magic and our weapons. Are they allowed to have a power that doesn't really have anything to do with our character's element? I mean I know Grnmachine's character has hypnosis and Esmeray's weapons can shrink so that's why I'm asking.
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I might change my weapon to the ones in his picture... double spear...one being his father’s....
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