Actually yes that's not bad at all. I omitted pictures because I wasn't confident I could find one that fit the part but I like that one. I may include some referencial images in the final submission.

As for name, the professional, appropriate answer is to call her by her surname as Takeda-san. "Kira" is predominantly a nickname derivative of her forename. Anyone can use it, but few people can use it [i]and not get shot in the throat[/i].