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I'll be honest, so far my first post is still my favorite out of all four.
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I looked at it and thought 'fug me that's long', but once I got into it I found it to be a very enjoyable read. Her interaction with the crows was a bit childish, but that made sense given her age. I thought the way she was developed in her interactions with Gwyn and Lloyd was nicely done - and it might be just me, but I found myself rooting for LloydxHelvana somewhat through all that.