[quote=@Ellion]
[@Legion02]

It looks really good. My only suggestions would be to expand on what happened between his first bride and now (that’s like....400 years time) did his brides bare him children? What’s his family structure like? Where is he usually based out of? 
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Added 2 more paragraphs concerning his life after the war and his sons. However, I don't fully understand what you mean with where is usually based out of. Do you mean what fortress? Or land? There isn't really a map so I guess that would be hard to tell?

[b]EDIT:[/b] I also kept his current martial status and what he did the past few years pretty vague so if anyonhe wanted to play his current wife, I could easily incorporate her.

[b]EDIT 2:[/b] And if anyone wants to discuss relations or something, just shoot me a PM. I have no problem doing it over PM but if you want to discuss a lot, I'd suggest we do it over Discord.