[@lightningalpha1] It's like you said, a little choppy but I like the theme and build of it all! I do have a few questions though and just want to ask about that wish. Starting with the latter. You sure you want to have her wish be something so... immeasurable? How would she know when she's reached her wish without a sort of bar to measure up to? Just a thought, you don't need to change it. As for the other bits I'd like a little more reason behind why she knows her survival training and knife handiness. It seems odd for a mechanic to have those two traits given I imagine mechanics being in shops within walls more than anything. Beyond that though I sure like 'em!