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Also, one can use [noparse][noparse][/noparse][/noparse] if one doesn't want code to actually do anything. Like I just did on the very code to use it. Heh.


[@SupernovaBlitz] The heck do you mean "love Pokémon for more than is socially allowed"? This is the Pokémon World! Basically everyone loves Pokémon! I don't think there's any social limits on loving Pokémon here! Or do you mean he does immoral experiments on Pokémon the general public would have issue with, or what? XD


That said, I think I would prefer if the hider included his name in front, with perhaps some fluff after if you so wish. The link to his image doesn't work as intended, I have to remove a ".com", which is more than I should.


I will say the first-person all-blue paragraph of background might not have had the effect you were going for. It felt like unnecessary padding when I just wanted the information. Quotes for flavoring can be used in-between sections, but like this it dragged.


So his name is Steven and had a tutor named Stevenson? Heh. Okay. Well, that is perfectly plausible.


Alright, so he trained for months before actually being given his own Pokémon. A little excessive, but alright. Anything to become as efficient a Pokémon trainer as possible, I assume. This background is accepted. [sub][sub][i]*turns to look at fairly well-sculpted world*[/i] ... Now to figure out where those parents fit into this.[/sub][/sub]


"a strange bracelet/watch that allows him to integrate technology into it, such as a pokedex, found in a capsule that fell from the sky" - I'm, uh, confused. That one came out of nowhere. Honestly, I might even have considered it if you said he MADE it, because he's that much of a scientific genius, but you're saying it literally fell out of the sky? No explanation? Why do you even need it, it's not like I'm burdening the others with needing to mind how they're carrying all the things in their inventories? I'm afraid that until I know the answers to that I cannot allow you to have this item.


It is the intention that the players is to determine who their first Pokémon that they receive from Kalmia is, even if the character themselves won't know. Now, you didn't claim anywhere that you were done, but you did say you posted it here for review, so I'll say that. Unless you for some reason want me to pick your first Pokémon, make the sheet for that one, too, following the rules in the first OOC page.

[@Eklispe] Gotcha. Nicely posted, anyway~
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I will edit my post accordingly, and get back on you. When can I post my character in the characters tab?