[center][i][h1]a c c e p t e d[/h1][/i][img]https://i.imgur.com/FDSXxhg.png?1[/img][/center] [sub]Everyone that has been accepted may move their sheets to the character tab.[/sub] [@Virani] [@Rabidporcupine] [@Lord Zee] [@Riegal] [@Fabricant451] [@Lawful Newtral] [@Symphoni] [@Syn] [@Hero] [@Bee] [@Reflection] [@Angel Eyes] [@vertigh0st] [indent] [color=white][sub]└ We just ask that you make sure to fix your coding. Remove the slash from the [/hr] tags for them to work.[/sub][/color][/indent] [center][i][h1][color=gray]d e n i e d[/color][/h1][/i][img]https://i.imgur.com/FDSXxhg.png?1[/img][/center] [@Infernal Flame] [indent] [color=gray][sub]➤ While this is a beautiful sheet, we do feel that it is a bit lackluster. └ Karishima is too overpowered; we'd prefer that you choose one power and stick to it. Sure, there may be "sub-powers," but they'll still have to be connected to the central power. └ We're also concerned about her having an internship at Nylon. As a high school student, she would have had trouble applying to intern at such a large corporate company as most have strict HR policies in place and will only hire currently enrolled college students. └ This is a smaller issue, but under "Age/Grade Level" you have her listed as a seventeen year old Sophomore, but in parenthesis you have 11th grade. I think you meant to put Junior, instead?[/sub][/color] [/indent]