[quote=@Kho] You may not have noticed, but I have been watching Minus' development since I read the episode with Mafie... [/quote] Thanks for the feedback and the praise. It's a confidence booster to hear about the stuff I did correctly. Personally, though, it was the relative lack of character development that made the love hard for me to craft. It's one thing to describe the hints of love through noticing a smile or making rash decisions. It's quite another to mix a cemented love by showing how the subjects enjoy each other's company. That's why I described Cinead and Mira's relationship as 'fiat.' They didn't really get enough chances to demonstrate how they enjoy their company together as characters that bounce off one another. You didn't really get to feel the niceness they both had in a quiet moment, in a friendly conversation, and so on. Even their scene hunting together is ambiguous because the amount of disguising on Mira's part is meant to be unclear. Maybe I'm reading into it too much. At any rate, all the gaps can be filled going forward. I plan to test the relationship for a number of possible dramas in the future. Thanks again for the feedback, though. Even if it didn't turn out completely as I expected, I did work quite hard on that arc. Rest assured that my self criticism is not so much a punishment as it is exploring my own expectations.