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[@Infernal Flame]
[indent] [color=gray][sub]➤ While this is a beautiful sheet, we do feel that it is a bit lackluster. 
└ Karishima is too overpowered; we'd prefer that you choose one power and stick to it. Sure, there may be "sub-powers," but they'll still have to be connected to the central power. 
└ We're also concerned about her having an internship at Nylon. As a high school student, she would have had trouble applying to intern at such a large corporate company as most have strict HR policies in place and will only hire currently enrolled college students.
└ This is a smaller issue, but under "Age/Grade Level" you have her listed as a seventeen year old Sophomore, but in parenthesis you have 11th grade. I think you meant to put Junior, instead?[/sub][/color] [/indent]
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Am I completely denied from entry or would it be possible to tweak my character sheet? Let me know and I apologize for all the issue.