[quote=@Savo] [@Darkmoon Angel] alright, so I've gotten around to reading her and so far I haven't seen anything that seems so bad. The backstory is ok as far as I concerned and she seems a bit too normal from what I'm looking at... like amongst her other soon to be cast members ranging from the trio listed above to a mercenary wolfgirl who loves blowing things up to a guy who learned how to fight through beating up Walruses... Regardless, nothing really wrong with her appearing that way, makes her stand out a lot more when you compare em' to the others, but I digress. Fighting style makes a lot of sense based on how she learned it while she grew up, and nothing really bothers me a lot, save for one of the moves. While there isn't really nothing wrong with this one, I question why she actually has the move [Repulse]. She's a close range fighter, but she's knocking them away from her. Just something I noticed that doesn't make any sense to me, at least for the moment. If you could, would you explain the reasoning behind why if you have any? In other news, she looks solid to me; get your approval from [@KaiserElectric] and [@redbaron1234] and you'll be good to go! [/quote] [Repulse] is a defensive move like [Full Guard], but it can also be used offensively. Like, say if the opponent is pressuring her, [Repulse] can be used to knock the opponent off balance, allowing Karliah to turn the tables. I meant to make Karliah "normal" in terms of this rp. I feel it gives her kind of an underdog appearance.