[quote=@Savo] We will check your characters out, but when the ooc comes up, please refrain from posting WIP. While it does help for us to look it over, we don't want to congest it at least. If you want to talk WIP over then, shoot us all a pm, we'll do fine there. [/quote] I have at least two other character ideas to fit the niche of the robot and myth standpoint (actually 3 if you consider a human - but I most likely wont use them all. Character idea wise I have ideas a few examples: This is for a possible heroic Mecha Robot Warrior: [center][hider=My Hider] [img]https://img00.deviantart.net/3514/i/2013/109/7/f/mech_warrior_by_thiago_almeida-d62a8go.jpg[/img] [/hider][/center] An intelligent alien velociraptor loose from containment: [center][hider=My Hider] [img]https://i.pinimg.com/originals/21/eb/9e/21eb9e20bc161627fe0a97d3c2c98c4d.jpg[/img] [/hider][/center] And a future time-traveling human who was sent to stop something or idk: [center][hider=My Hider] [img]https://i.pinimg.com/736x/73/93/32/73933241bb20ad725c6dd887ee83e9c9.jpg[/img] [/hider][/center] Again, these are all ideas. I'd at least use two more and nothing more. [quote=@KaiserElectric] [@Lmpkio] Calis looks pretty neat so far! My one quibble is that his weakness feels like more of a character flaw, and while what you have there is perfectly acceptable, in the weaknesses section we are specifically looking for weaknesses as a fighter. If it helps, try explaining what an enemy fighter would need to do to beat your guy. Keep it up though, I'm hype to see the whole thing. ^^ [/quote] Ah yes. I have a few ideas for that. And glad you like him so far! :D