[quote=@Triesa] Ok, didn't know that. I admit I think my char's history is a bit weak, but I'm finding it hard to expand it.. writers block, fml. [/quote] Funnily enough, your character's backstory is my primary issue, just kinda funny happenstance. So, on that note, allow me to explain my issues with your backstory; also, hi, I'm Zarkun, a member of the Council of Squares in the Discord Server and kind of a...mod? here in the RP. First off, how and why is he Force Sensitive? In the current iteration, there's no explanation, but it's stated that Radda is a Force Sensitive Bounty Hunter. With that said, your current iteration is better fitting for an exceptionally skilled non-Sensitive assassin who's well known for getting high end contracts. More than that, how does he even know about it? The Empire legitimately buried evidence of the Force. Second issue, how does a teen with supposedly no prior experience get a perfect throat slit? Especially since even with the stab wounds to the back, his father would be thrashing around to try and dislodge the lad. Simply put, it doesn't make any kind of sense, as cool as it sounds. Third issue is the lack of how he became a cyborg. Just another thing that's just kinda...there. Now it's fine that he is, but an explanation of what happened to cause it would be good. Fourth and...well, we'll settle for final issue, is how he became a swordsman. Again, just there, with no real reason why. Also, with how did he come into possession of a B-Wing fighter? The Rebels were the only ones to have them manufactured, literally.