[@Dead Cruiser]

I know Savo has commented on the hyperbole in the CS already, so I wont beat that drum again, though I do wish for that to be toned down.

The other main issue I  have with Makoto is her move set and her weakness. Her fighting style imply more of a rushdown character but her actual move set implies a shotoclone. You should rethink what you want to focus on. The other problem is the weaknesses which is tied to the hyperbole a bit. You make it sound like she almost Exhausts herself out after a single punch, which makes me question how much of that hyperbole is real or not. When you are toning down her extremeness, you will need to redo her weaknesses, especially if you are going to refocus on the shotoclone aspect or the rushdown aspect of her character.