COMMENTING TIME [@Dead Cruiser] Hmm...I like the concept of over the top power but I think it goes a little too far. You do define her weakness, ie surviving long enough to easily counter, but I don't really see a way to outlast her given her versatile moveset and having her speed and strength so high. The concept is still pretty fun sounding but I think you should tune up the weakness to match the strength. I don't want to dictate how you make the character, but I would suggest adding to the weaknesses that she telegraphs her moves really obviously (like with over the top windups and loudly calling out her attacks). Your call in the end though, still excited to see what she can do! [@Pirouette] What a woobie. I like her a lot but I'm shaky on the permanency of her Death and Decay super. I'm fine with debilitating effects on moves like Acid Bomb since they can still do short term damage without the long term effects implied, but you specify that the damage is permanent, which doesn't really work for this genre. If you want to have it work that way on regular non-Nomad opponents that's fine but I'd rather it not do that long term damage against other PCs. Otherwise her moveset is just peachy and I'll accept her once the change is made. ^^ [@DracoLunaris] No complaints here, he looks great! Though I personally would have moved Embrace Ancestry and Ancestral Mantle to the fighting style section, since it's more talking about his style then actual special moves, that's more on my style then on you. [b]Accepted![/b]