[@Dead Cruiser]
Makoto V2:
I am pleased with the changes you've made. 

Her back story is fine by me, and I do like the fact that you already get her (over) confidence across by her taking up her grandfather's mantle and all that. 

Fighting Style wise, I am pleased to see that you've focused on the rushdown aspect of her. You've changed one of her ranged attacks up to a short range blast, which I can dig. Black Star Nova seems like an arena trap, and requires some setup to use as a ranged attack, which I think is a good compromise. I also appreciate that you changed the descriptions of the Super moves to make it more clear that it is just hyping up the attack a little in character than actual descriptions of their power. 

I do like the fact that you made her inexperience and lack of defense a weakness, against more experienced opponents. Her poor staying power also is a logical extension of her intense fighting style, and I can forsee fun scenes where she has to deal with the double edged sword that is her fighting style.

You now have the green light from me.