[quote=@Zarkun]First nitpick, Empire has only fallen a few months prior to the start of the RP.[/quote] Edited, assuming I fixed the thing you were referring to. [quote=@Zarkun] Second; the tracking thing. It's kinda...vague. How does he track a target through a city scape, especially if say, this person has been on the run for awhile and has gotten good at blending in.[/quote] Are you talking about the point I made in the strength section? Can that not be something I make an example of IC? [quote=@Zarkun]Also there's the vision thing, I can't say it granting him foresight is OK...since you say it lets him see his opponent's moves before they make them.[/quote]That part I left over from my first draft that you saw, true, I shouldn't have left it in. He's not a force user anymore, so I changed it up.