[@Valor]
Ashley:

The quibble I have is her moveset. I dont mind her moves being "Shoot with a rifle", "SHoot with a Deagle", and "Get more ammo for both" if you dont, but a common rule with tournaments is "No non-ki infused attacks". I'm not sure if your character is the kind to really care, but that would be a thing they would have to contend with later on.
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[@Roughdragon1]
Vikkar:
Im fine with Vikkar's back story and fighting style. You have no issues from me. 

As for his moveset, Im with Savo here. As worded several of his attacks would just flat out not work against characters that are robotic or have a radically different anatomy than a normal human. He would benefit from rewording his attacks to some explanation that would allow him to use these attacks on such characters. However if you are fine with that, or are willing to accept those as a Thing, I am fine with that. Just be aware of that.

My other big worry is about his armor. You mention it's as strong as titanium. Did you want that to be just fluff, or are characters with steel weapons going to have a hard time? 


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[@wxps350]
SYM-04:
Everything looks good, Welcome Back you freaky dude.

Ivory: 
Same thing. Bring the pain!

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[@Lmpkio]
Aleksander:

Backstory is fine, and pretty unique for this setting. Thematically pretty different from you first one at least.

My major concern is much like Vikkar, is of that armor. If it is basically bulletproof to modern weapons, how does it fare against the typical character's attack? I'm fine with Mighty Glacier characters, just wary REALLY heard to crack nuts.