*spits out water* This. Is. EPIC.
That first post...sheesh. That was TOO GOOD. I got chills. Mind = blown. Again. I absolutely /loved/ how you played this all out, and the way you had Kyair interact with someone else gave a great feel of his character already. He's amazing. 

Much like ALoWaN, this is gorgeously put together. You've outdone yourself once again, my friend.

Don't change a thing. The song's downright awesome and I even saved it to my phone. I'm honestly blown away by all of this. 

Ooh, yes. I like the idea of her being able to sense him. It'll be a nice addition to their chaotic relationship.
I'll be working on my post. If questions pop up, do you prefer that I ask them here or text them to you?

One more time, this is epic. Just...everything. I can't get over it. You never cease to amaze. From the bottom of my heart, thank you so much for putting all of this together!