[@Nallore] Okay, here are my comments: - This is likely the weirdest comment I've ever made, but I am mildly OCD apparently. Her mother and sister both have 4 names, whereas she has 3. So if you could add a 4th name... (again, I cannot believe I am writing this O.O) - Darke Name will be Anul - Residence: the Palace - Second Bedroom, Third Corridor Off the Long Walk - She can have two more general skills if you like. But she doesn't have to have two more. - Whereas she can wear green, the Royal Family does wear red by tradition so she'd need to have a red cloak on top or something like that - For crown, think you meant crown - as sans crown means no crown Occupational Skills - Put these in as written Bluff - The ability to erroneously persuade another person that you can perform a given task or that a given event will happen. Diplomacy - The ability to come to a mutually agreeable outcome without bloodshed through use of skill and tact. Castle History - The knowledge of the rich history of the Castle, including notable ExtraOrdinary Wizards and Queens. Riding - The ability to ride a horse at twice the speed of an unskilled rider. This includes trick riding and basic care for the horse. Court Etiquette - The knowledge of how to act in the capacity as a member of the Castle's Royal Family. This includes awareness of political relations and customs. Formal Dancing - The ability to dance with graceful form and composure. This includes the ability to switch roles (a female will know the male's role and vice versa). Administration - The ability to delegate tasks to others in order to ensure that everything runs smoothly.