[@Zaphander] Me and Lunar have a number of problems with your Cs 

We want to know more in detail about your protection magic 

Then there's your shield that's able to deflect magic like Arrows 

and the fact that he can wield a greatsword well enough to shave a man with his sword

I personally don't like how the backstory is set up, it makes it seem like Joseph and this holy order is in the world, but humans to the world are a rarity and having a holy order of humans in a demonic realm without them coming under attack constantly doesn't make sense to me, edit it to where he comes to this world like everyone else does instead of just hearing about the camp.