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Thanks!

I've added some edits here and there which I hope covers all of your points. The Gold thing, yeah pretty much I've made it less specific in the sheet. 

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Much better! You have my seal of approval on this. We just need approval from our fiercely fearsome Lord Commander [@Dervish]!