[@Rawk] Well, the idea was to write what specifically happened to your character through the whole first IC. More specifically what was going through his head. But it isn't entirely necessary. What you posted was not wrong btw because it showed part of what happened to Bryson. If you want to add another you can but you don't have to. This first set of posts is more or less for yours and the others benefit so that y'all get a feel for what is going on, and what is happening to your characters.