[@The One] Okay I'm at work wo I'll be brief. While me and Zomb think she has an interesting abstraction, we think the rest of her character could use some work. The main thing is that she just doesn't have a reason to be in the story. She's already a world star... It just doesn't make a whole lot of sense for her to be in college in Farmer Hill.

It also makes her feel out of place with the rest of the cast who are more organic tbh. The easy way to fix this would be to make her an up and coming musician, orrrrr do what I did with Kimberly and make her an e-celeb.

I have a few other minor grips but I have to head back to work and typing on my phone is tiring.