[@The One] A very clear improvement - the only thing that bugs me is that she doesn't seem to have a last name (lol) and you wrote "Texian" as her [i]ethnicity[/i] (I know Texas is practically a different country but lol). But, before I accept her, does her abstraction work with any kind of music, or just the music she makes?

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Well that was... brutal. How about us three in the infirmary, is that by the campfire? Would we see or hear the commotion (I'm assuming yes)?
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Yus.