[@Lauder]

Storywise, everything is fine except for her title as Jörmungandr. The real Jörmungandr is currently being controlled by a GM so that's prohibited. Furthermore, for her Soul Consumption, can you describe exactly what kind of power souls give her. Is is a physical boost, an elemental ability like her heat powers, etc.

Aside from those points, I see nothing wrong with her. Edit them and she's fine by me. Await the others' opinion.